Sparrow

sparrow chirping in
flame tree melodiously ~
exhilaration

14.08.2021

Tania Kitchin
Songbird haiku 1st
BS1
AP
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Goldsmith Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 10:02 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write and bird. Have a blessed day...............
Jayasankar Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 10:20 AM
So beautiful... Congrats on your win dear Rama... Hugs... ~ Ani
Daniel Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 6:29 AM
Congratulations on top win with this simple beauty, Rama:)
Dietrich Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 3:11 PM
Way to go with your number one win. Congrats, Rama.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 1:44 PM
Congratulations, Rama! A lovely Haiku!
Kauffman Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 9:39 AM
Oh, this is such a lovely picture Rama. The lowly sparrow has a beautiful song. We have lots of sparrows that come to our feeder. They are a humble little bird with a mighty song! Blessings my friend!
Dutta Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 5:30 AM
Big Congrats to win top. Love.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 5:17 AM
Congratulations, Rama!
Kitchin Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 4:26 AM
Rama, congratulations on your first place win with your wonderful haiku, love the last line!
Balasubramanian Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 7:33 AM
Thanks for hosting the contest and my generous placement. God bless! Take care
Daniel Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 11:00 PM
Brilliant, Rama, congratulations:)
Dietrich Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 2:41 PM
I see you did sparrow too. They are considered nearly the best of the songbirds and by number of them. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 9:54 AM
Congratulations on your beautiful haiku! Love ~ Mala
Alex Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 9:39 AM
I had read it earlier I think. I failed to comment. Forgotten might be. This is a great work. Congratulations!
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August 14, 2021 at 2:17 PM
A beautiful birdsong Haiku Rama. All the best… Belle
Cunningham Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 11:06 AM
Lovely image Rama, hope you are having a nice weekend. Tom
Poet Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 7:43 AM
Great Haiku, Rama. My very best wishes with the contest.
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