sparkling sun

sun's sparks suck spirits cows chewing the cud in shade~ silent surroundings Place: 3rd

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Lucas Smith

Date: 7/7/2024 12:45:00 PM

Love a good Haiku! Wonderfully done

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2024 9:49:00 AM

Great alliteration. Congrats on the win

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 7/4/2024 11:13:00 PM

Thank you so much for the compliments.

thriveni c mysore

Date: 7/2/2024 10:47:00 PM

Nice image. Congratulations dear poet.

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 7/3/2024 4:06:00 AM

Thank you so much for your compliments.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/2/2024 4:28:00 PM

Patri, congratulations on your winning placement, a creative one.

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 7/3/2024 4:07:00 AM

Thanks a lot for the compliments.