Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Haiku

sparkling sun

                                   sun's sparks suck spirits

                               cows chewing the cud in shade~

                                      silent surroundings



Place: 3rd

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Lucas Smith July 7, 2024 at 12:45 PM Love a good Haiku! Wonderfully done

Andrea Dietrich July 3, 2024 at 9:49 AM Great alliteration. Congrats on the win Patri Venkata Ramana July 4, 2024 at 11:13 PM Thank you so much for the compliments.

thriveni c mysore July 2, 2024 at 10:47 PM Nice image. Congratulations dear poet. Patri Venkata Ramana July 3, 2024 at 4:06 AM Thank you so much for your compliments.

Tania Kitchin July 2, 2024 at 4:28 PM Patri, congratulations on your winning placement, a creative one. Patri Venkata Ramana July 3, 2024 at 4:07 AM Thanks a lot for the compliments.