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Sparkling Creation

In this beautiful dawn On snow covered lawn Light pink, gray, blue and white Swirled all around, above me in my sight A sky of pastel colors, completely full, encircled me As I stood in the snow, amazed at what I could see Some clouds with bright lining, defined on backdrop of blue Strokes of gray and pink, covered east to west, this morning is new A full sparkling creation welcomed the beginning of this precious day The soft sky painted a door of entry to lighten my thoughts on my way Heidi Sands 12/18/19

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/24/2019 1:11:00 AM

You are an artist with a pen. Great descriptive work, always. Panagiota

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/24/2019 5:46:00 AM

Thank you Panagiota. I hope you have great day :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/19/2019 9:58:00 PM

With this wonderful poem, 'show me the door' takes on a 100% positive meaning. So nice! :) gw

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/20/2019 4:23:00 PM

Thank you so much Gershon! I appreciate your comments and hope you are well :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/19/2019 5:05:00 AM

Mesmerizing imagery and writing dearest, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/19/2019 11:03:00 AM

Thank you so much Demetrios. It was so beautiful to see the other morning, breathtaking. :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/19/2019 1:57:00 AM

Heidi, your artistic poetic heart not only sees what many miss, but you can convey it to us, so we also see it!

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/19/2019 11:03:00 AM

Thank you Caren. I am thrilled to be able to convey the beauty I see to others. I am also grateful to live in a beautiful place. Although, God's creation is all around us, everywhere . All we have to do is look and take it in. :)

Na Na

Date: 12/18/2019 4:43:00 PM

Beautiful imagery Heidi. Thanks for sharing. God creates so much beauty

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/19/2019 11:02:00 AM

You are right. God creates so much beauty, stunning beauty. Thank you for your kind comment Gregory :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/18/2019 2:18:00 PM

As beautiful as a painting--in splendid brushstrokes--superb imagery, Heidi. I am saving this in my FAVES.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/18/2019 4:41:00 PM

Hi Vijay. It was so beautifully soft and stunning. I am happy to see that you consider this a FAVE. Thank you very much :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/18/2019 12:40:00 PM

- A wonderful morning, Heidi ... hope you had a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/18/2019 4:40:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise. I hope you are well. Have a nice evening. Hugs :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/18/2019 12:04:00 PM

sounds like a magical morning and wonderful inspiration for a great poem... i love watching the sky erupt in an array of colors...i bet it was breathtaking contrast with the snow... beautiful Heidi :) hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/18/2019 4:40:00 PM

It was a gorgeous sky, all around with snow everywhere below. Just stunning. Thank you Sandra, it was certainly inspiring :)

Chris Green

Date: 12/18/2019 9:29:00 AM

A beautiful morning and a beautiful poem is the best way to start the day. Good morning Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/18/2019 11:15:00 AM

Thank you Chris. I appreciate your kind comment. Good afternoon (now). :)