Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

Sparkling Creation

In this beautiful dawn
On snow covered lawn
Light pink, gray, blue and white
Swirled all around, above me in my sight
A sky of pastel colors, completely full, encircled me
As I stood in the snow, amazed at what I could see
Some clouds with bright lining, defined on backdrop of blue
Strokes of gray and pink, covered east to west, this morning is new
A full sparkling creation welcomed the beginning of this precious day
The soft sky painted a door of entry to lighten my thoughts on my way

Heidi Sands

12/18/19

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Panagiota Romios December 24, 2019 at 1:11 AM You are an artist with a pen. Great descriptive work, always. Panagiota Heidi Sands December 24, 2019 at 5:46 AM Thank you Panagiota. I hope you have great day :)

Gershon Wolf December 19, 2019 at 9:58 PM With this wonderful poem, 'show me the door' takes on a 100% positive meaning. So nice! :) gw Heidi Sands December 20, 2019 at 4:23 PM Thank you so much Gershon! I appreciate your comments and hope you are well :)

Demetrios Trifiatis December 19, 2019 at 5:05 AM Mesmerizing imagery and writing dearest, Heidi. Heidi Sands December 19, 2019 at 11:03 AM Thank you so much Demetrios. It was so beautiful to see the other morning, breathtaking. :)

Caren Krutsinger December 19, 2019 at 1:57 AM Heidi, your artistic poetic heart not only sees what many miss, but you can convey it to us, so we also see it! Heidi Sands December 19, 2019 at 11:03 AM Thank you Caren. I am thrilled to be able to convey the beauty I see to others. I am also grateful to live in a beautiful place. Although, God's creation is all around us, everywhere . All we have to do is look and take it in. :)

Na Na December 18, 2019 at 4:43 PM Beautiful imagery Heidi. Thanks for sharing. God creates so much beauty Heidi Sands December 19, 2019 at 11:02 AM You are right. God creates so much beauty, stunning beauty. Thank you for your kind comment Gregory :)

Vijay Pandit December 18, 2019 at 2:18 PM As beautiful as a painting--in splendid brushstrokes--superb imagery, Heidi. I am saving this in my FAVES. Heidi Sands December 18, 2019 at 4:41 PM Hi Vijay. It was so beautifully soft and stunning. I am happy to see that you consider this a FAVE. Thank you very much :)

Anne-Lise Andresen December 18, 2019 at 12:40 PM - A wonderful morning, Heidi ... hope you had a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Heidi Sands December 18, 2019 at 4:40 PM Thank you Anne-Lise. I hope you are well. Have a nice evening. Hugs :)

Sandra Adams December 18, 2019 at 12:04 PM sounds like a magical morning and wonderful inspiration for a great poem... i love watching the sky erupt in an array of colors...i bet it was breathtaking contrast with the snow... beautiful Heidi :) hugs Heidi Sands December 18, 2019 at 4:40 PM It was a gorgeous sky, all around with snow everywhere below. Just stunning. Thank you Sandra, it was certainly inspiring :)

Chris Green December 18, 2019 at 9:29 AM A beautiful morning and a beautiful poem is the best way to start the day. Good morning Heidi. Heidi Sands December 18, 2019 at 11:15 AM Thank you Chris. I appreciate your kind comment. Good afternoon (now). :)