Sparkling

how about
the sparkling centerpiece
of a twinkling day
winking at me 
through eyes unseen
   but felt
warmly, on my bare shoulder
heaven shudders
      and so does my body
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 8:06 AM
very nice!
Shahwan Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 6:27 AM
Beautiful.
Lopez Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 3:07 PM
Nice work and welcome to poetry soup.
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