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Sparkler

it's all heating up with just one match like a sparkler that's been lit it's all now coming to a head and I can see the gist of it I may have missed a few of your points but what were you expecting in every mirror, in every thought it is here again reflecting I opened up my heart, and it spewed out everywhere like a soda that you shook, contents spraying in the air all those sticky droplets, that stain if not quickly wiped up and the glass that once remained half-full is now an empty cup yesterday has ebbed away like the sea from the smooth sand what I needed most from you withdrawn just like your hand sparklers eventually fizzle out dieing with one final glow the actuality of anything happening was like hell getting some snow

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Date: 7/4/2010 2:55:00 PM
You have just described my world wow well done understand your write so well sarah x
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Date: 7/4/2010 2:55:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today.. I'm new to the soup so I hope you have an open mind as far as poetry. Enjoy ya day.
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Date: 7/4/2010 2:45:00 PM
oooo, angsty, hope this is just a write and not a feeling that needed out, or maybe both, very good poem.
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Date: 7/4/2010 2:44:00 PM
Sad love loss write but very descriptive and expressive..Great metaphoric language..Keep the creativeness flowing..Sara
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