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Spark Crystalline

I struck a match, igniting a spark
         But it fizzled out in the dark


Date written and posted: 07/18/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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July 19, 2018 at 1:26 AM
Edward, at least you tried. At least you had a fire. At least you experienced the thrill of success.. you have a lot to think about in the dark!
Ibeh Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 6:13 AM
True! Your responses are always enlightening, LM!:-)
Gauthier Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 7:19 AM
Lovely, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 12:16 PM
Thank you, Line!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 7:04 AM
Great, Edward! Love your writing!
Ibeh Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 12:15 PM
Thank you, Kim!:-) Much love...
Ellison Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 6:25 AM
Good morning Edward! This is an interesting and fun new poetic form to me! Think I will explore it further... well done, my friend!!! Cheers, Jack
Ibeh Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 6:33 AM
Thank you, Jack! I just discovered it myself. I'll explore it further as well...
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