Spark Crystalline

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I struck a match, igniting a spark But it fizzled out in the dark Date written and posted: 07/18/2018

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Lyric Man

Date: 7/19/2018 1:26:00 AM

Edward, at least you tried. At least you had a fire. At least you experienced the thrill of success.. you have a lot to think about in the dark!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/19/2018 6:13:00 AM

True! Your responses are always enlightening, LM!:-)

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/18/2018 7:19:00 AM

Lovely, Edward.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/18/2018 12:16:00 PM

Thank you, Line!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/18/2018 7:04:00 AM

Great, Edward! Love your writing!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/18/2018 12:15:00 PM

Thank you, Kim!:-) Much love...

Jack Ellison

Date: 7/18/2018 6:25:00 AM

Good morning Edward! This is an interesting and fun new poetic form to me! Think I will explore it further... well done, my friend!!! Cheers, Jack

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/18/2018 6:33:00 AM

Thank you, Jack! I just discovered it myself. I'll explore it further as well...