Spark

what is this difference that I feel
this fire and energy
from the very first moment
this instant chemistry

are you using the heavy artillery?
I don't think it's needed
if this is you au natural
you're sweeping me off my feet

just the electrical spark
that I've been looking for
infused right from the start
as you reopen that door

your words are just like poetry
an arrow straight through to my heart
as one misses the opportunity
another takes it and runs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Hill Avatar
July 21, 2010 at 11:00 AM
glad to hear that someone is being swept off the feet...keep up the good work JB...TAH
Horsman Avatar
July 21, 2010 at 1:09 AM
awesome read this, Harry
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