Spark

Soft summer night under twilight as lover's kiss heavenly bliss. Hearts on fire heated desire ignited spark lights up the dark.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/7/2019 12:26:00 PM

Hello Phyllis, as I read this poem, I can see the couple in a embrace. So romantic. Have a nice day my friend.

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/14/2019 9:58:00 AM

A delightful poem, Phyllis! Blessings, Kim

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 8/14/2019 4:52:00 PM

Thanks Kim will have to sit and comment so behind on doing that. Doing our sons deck this summer and are painting the inside of the house at the moment. Had lots on the go. love phyl

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/14/2019 8:53:00 AM

Beautiful, Phyllis.

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 8/14/2019 4:50:00 PM

Thank for your comment on my poem. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/14/2019 4:48:00 AM

- Oh, this was beautifully written, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 8/14/2019 4:49:00 PM

Thanks Anne Lise for your comment. Hope all is well your way. Summer has been hot but nice. Garden has been good. Not looking forward to winter. love phyl