Spare Change

spare change

he takes shelter in a cardboard box
old newspapers for a bed
threadbare clothes rumpled and dirty
a concrete pillow for his head

picking up used cigarette butts
from the crowded littered street
dumpster diving for table scraps
searching for something to eat

huddling in an open doorway
on a cold cold winter’s night
battling to keep warm
swiftly losing the fight

asking hurried passers by
if they have change to spare 
no one gives a second look
no one seems to care

a salty tear rolls down 
his ruddy weathered cheek
what has happened to his life 
that it became so very bleak

March 5, 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 4/4/2020 2:33:00 PM
Nicely written. Depicts the situation very well.
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Date: 3/31/2020 2:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement. A wonderful poem. It is hard when people fall through the cracks in society. It happens more often than most would realize. Thank you for this wonderful poem. JC Hawkens
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Abby Desantis
Date: 3/31/2020 3:00:00 PM
Thank you for your comments. I’m afraid it may happen more with what we’re all living with now.
Date: 3/22/2020 9:57:00 PM
“But for the grace of God go I” comes immediately to mind when reading this. I haven’t been homeless because our aunt took us in but I can relate. Congratulations on your wonderful poem being on this short premier winner’s list Abby. Keep safe. xxoo
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Abby Desantis
Date: 3/22/2020 10:12:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/22/2020 1:14:00 PM
Congratulations Abby! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a very difficult contest to judge but your poem caught my eye, well done my friend, Emile.
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Abby Desantis
Date: 3/22/2020 1:20:00 PM
Thank you for your acknowledgment.
Date: 3/7/2020 8:29:00 AM
This sad and touching poem is so beautifully written, Abby, I can feel the emotion within. Nicely done. Welcome to Poetry Soup! All the best to you. John
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Abby Desantis
Date: 3/10/2020 5:44:00 PM
Thank You for your kind words. I lived in NYC for years and homelessness was a chronic problem. It was very hard to see everyday.
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