Spallow's Shore Shows Her Grace

How could I know that I could cast a life so complete? Knowing now my past has lost everything, I’ve seen defeat. Part of my life debilitated and taken down by the ocean's tow, I pant in tiny seeds of loneliness, aligning up in pain’s forever row. Root me inside the willows that wither inside of fields of the soot that wallows without the craving a fight to yield. This morn my throat swallows hope, feeling utter healing soon, tonight, by Spallow's shore stardust descends, gazing at the moon
. Stanza 1 How, now, tow, row Cast, past, part, pant Stanza 2 Root, soot, soon, moon Willows, wallows, swallows, Spallow's I used 2 word morph words in each line, I hope it doesn't DQ me. I thought this was a very fun contest. Thank you! "Spallow" is the name of a river by my home. It has the most beautiful shore. Sponsor: Jesse Rowe Word Morph Poetry Contest March 16, 2019
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Gauthier Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 7:41 AM
Bravo, Lu Loo. Congrats on your win with this beautifully executed double whammy.
Smith Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 2:03 PM
Cleverly worded, best wishes LuLoo...
Scars Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 5:28 AM
thank you dear Charlie :)-luloo
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