Space, Version 2

Between the ears of the greatest minds
Limits and laws do not exist    

Building roads and wrinkles to beyond
 Such brains are ripe with fascination

Where physical boundaries do not factor
Journeymen and women discover frontiers within themselves   

Forming the legendary, from the amorphous
They are contemplative, they are reminiscent 

Tireless and motivated I am just a rubbernecker  
Watching treasures without obstacles, by accident


 Eventually I choose to give them their space
Smiling back at them, they are our children
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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February 2, 2014 at 5:41 AM
This is an interesting piece; I enjoyed it. I have a few "celestial" inspired poems as well, and am working on an epic one right now. Kudos!
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