Space Oddities

oval shaped 
floating on a string 
tied around a smiling child's wrist 

powered by gas 
floating across the world 
until the sandbags drop  


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11/19/2021
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Goldsmith Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 11:03 AM
A creative/fun Haiku write. Enjoyed it. Have a blessed day.................
Kendrick Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 6:07 AM
Enjoyed reading your work. I can see the scene. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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November 21, 2021 at 1:42 PM
Excellent piece Charlie! A fav for me. Cheers Anne :-)
Wolf Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 7:38 PM
Hilarious, Charlie. ~ The Sandman
Rodrigues Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 7:30 AM
A cuteness to this one.
Romios Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 4:42 AM
Omg, Messina, hello from hospital heaven. You can be sure I am giving all, a hard time. But many are reading my poetry. I do love your Haiku.it is very clear. I am faving this, my friend. Rarely, will I fave a haiku. Love, Broken Leg, Pangie.Learning to walk again.xoxo
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