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Space Oddities

oval shaped floating on a string tied around a smiling child's wrist powered by gas floating across the world until the sandbags drop Hiku Contest Sponsored by William Kekaula 11/19/2021

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/1/2021 11:03:00 AM

A creative/fun Haiku write. Enjoyed it. Have a blessed day.................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/1/2021 6:07:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your work. I can see the scene. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 11/21/2021 1:42:00 PM

Excellent piece Charlie! A fav for me. Cheers Anne :-)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/20/2021 7:38:00 PM

Hilarious, Charlie. ~ The Sandman

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/20/2021 7:30:00 AM

A cuteness to this one.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 11/19/2021 4:42:00 AM

Omg, Messina, hello from hospital heaven. You can be sure I am giving all, a hard time. But many are reading my poetry. I do love your Haiku.it is very clear. I am faving this, my friend. Rarely, will I fave a haiku. Love, Broken Leg, Pangie.Learning to walk again.xoxo