Felisha Coon Poet Rhyme

Space Inside

In the light of my space,
I left this open seat for you.
I just thought you might take this space of mine next to you.
Next to you is where I'd like to be.
This is my place where I am free.
I hope you'd like to be in this space between the things you and I have always dreamed.
Come on inside my time and we can do this right.
Right by our sides in this space of light.
In this space of time.

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Richard Lamoureux May 2, 2014 at 6:01 PM What a cool concept, this one has caused me to add you to my favorite poets list. Consider changing "you" to me in your third line, it makes more sense with the idea you are expressing.