Space Ghost

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Poetic Form: Triversen
Inspired: 2024 February 17

*Chosen subject derived from my poem: 'The Natural Probe', the contrast is interesting.

Image: Silhouette of A Person Standing by Wallpaper Flare

Found in space possible sighting worthy of closeup change of course wonder on the horizon a balanced theme an event of sorts natural or not a peculiar thing mayhaps instrumental tis unfortunate no contact be it but a scene a wallpaper our viewing point seems war-like set course for home nothing here but shadows.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/18/2024 3:15:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this 'sci-fi' poem. It was an intriguing read, especially with the last three lines.

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/18/2024 4:24:00 PM

It's a difficult form, Sara. I'm uncertain it's take will be with soupers. Aloha, William