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7/11/12
-a collaberation with my friend who wishes to remain anonymous -

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Separated by the emotion barrier
Pierced by your absence of words
Anguished by annoyance and abnormalities
Calling out your name
Emptiness is your reply
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Beaufort Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 6:15 PM
Laura, I don't know how you found me, but I always like it when someone comments--Thanks I received an email and logged in to see who was the kind party. This work certainly has captured a void. Your comment on top is very fitting--it makes me laugh actually. I would say it's clever.
Beaufort Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 6:15 PM
I mean--you are clever!
Breidenthal Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 6:19 PM
Ha ha! Thanks! :)
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