Sowing a Seed To Make Me Bleed

Much consideration was spent choosing a seed with intent 
For I didn't want a weed,  I had a much higher need
So I planted the seed deep in the Earth with caution not heed
Hoping it was heaven sent, it grew strong proud and slightly bent
But unknowingly to me I was sowing a seed to make me bleed

It wonderously grew with an amazing stock of emerald blue
When a violet flower did appear I let out an ecstatic joyous cheer
But it was to good to be true for a thorn made a breakthrough 
My blood did smear for my touch it seemed to unquestionable fear
I did not try to construe for some things just happen to be askew
I dug up the little dear and gifted to a friend with a saddened tear

* I was literally entering the contest as last poem, but someone beat me to it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 3/12/2020 5:54:00 AM
It is a gorgeous poem whether in a contest or just as a pleasure for us readers.
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/12/2020 7:36:00 AM
Thank you Caren. Hugs
Date: 3/7/2020 4:50:00 PM
So sorry you were unable to enter this Cecilia. I am sure it would have been on the winner's list. Our world would be much less colorful without the beauty of flowers. Lovely! xxoo
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/7/2020 6:35:00 PM
Thank you Connie. Hugs
Date: 3/7/2020 8:24:00 AM
LOL, the race is on when you see one entry is left. This one is good.
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/7/2020 8:59:00 AM
Thank you Kim. Hugs
Date: 3/3/2020 1:07:00 PM
In life we may aim high, but achieving perfection is probably beyond us, Cecilia! I enjoyed this poem a lot, and the internal rhymes are worthy of note. This would have done well in any contest. Regards & Hugs // paul
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/3/2020 5:33:00 PM
Thank you so much Paul. In my life I aim for peace, but choose firecrackers, lol. Hugs
Date: 2/29/2020 12:56:00 PM
Such a shame it was not entered.. deeply expressed...
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/3/2020 5:34:00 PM
Thank you Silent One. Yes it was a shame. Hugs
Date: 2/28/2020 1:39:00 PM
Your thoughts remind me, that Roses have thorns. When feeling that prick and then watching blood drip.. you know- beauty you shall soon behold. As, from a tiny seed- roses are born. Tender sigh. ~ Brandy
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/3/2020 5:36:00 PM
Yes, sometimes something so beautiful can inflict much pain. Hugs
Date: 2/27/2020 4:16:00 PM
I've had that happen; my heart racing to enter a contest that has room for only one more! Like you, I've lost that moment but won some, too - you will also. There's a lot of beauty in your imagery filled lines and a great depth of emotion that is palatable. Maybe another contest will fit this poem down the road. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/3/2020 5:38:00 PM
Thank you Caycay. Maybe we can both enter our almost in contest poems. Hugs
Date: 2/26/2020 3:56:00 PM
oh how sad. I think it happened to me once too. Don't you just hate that??? what inspiration you got from the event,however.
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/3/2020 5:41:00 PM
Yes, but it got me to write and post which is good. Hugs
Date: 2/26/2020 11:04:00 AM
That has also happened to me Cecilia but your poem is terrific, so just think of it as a win! Blessings, Jennifer.
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/3/2020 5:42:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer. I will think of it that way. Hugs
Date: 2/26/2020 8:11:00 AM
I’m sure this would have done well. Even though you couldn’t enter it you have gifted us with a beautiful piece.
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 2/26/2020 8:34:00 AM
Thank you Richard. You put a smile on my face. Hugs
Date: 2/26/2020 6:06:00 AM
This is a beautiful write, Cecilia. I'm certain it would have placed well. That has happened to me a couple of times too. Regardless, very well done! Hugs Charlie
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 2/26/2020 8:35:00 AM
Thank you Charlie. Hugs
Date: 2/25/2020 10:55:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this, poetically expressed. Thanks likewise for the compliments. God bless you.
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 2/26/2020 8:36:00 AM
Thank you Beata. Hugs
Date: 2/25/2020 8:59:00 PM
sorry you missed the deadline and I am sure this would have been on the winner's list... great write! hugs
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 2/26/2020 8:37:00 AM
Thank you Sandra. Hugs
Date: 2/21/2020 8:18:00 AM
- Your poem is beautiful ... a seed planted for hope - Best wishes for a lovely weekend, Cecilia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 2/26/2020 8:38:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. Hugs
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