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Poem submitted to “King of Terrors” poetry contest, Rob Carmack, sponsor, September 3, 2026

 

Sovereign of Bent Spoons and Unsaid Terrors

He appears at the edge of the room  
exactly where the wallpaper forgets  
what pattern it meant to keep.  
No fanfare.  
Just a soft shuffle,  
like someone dragging a crown  
made of misplaced thoughts.

He isn’t frightening.  
He’s simply tall enough  
to bump his head on the ceiling  
and polite enough  
to apologize to the plaster.

Every time he speaks,  
a small flock of paper birds  
flies out of his mouth  
and circles the lamp  
as if searching for a reason  
to be afraid.

He carries a scepter  
that looks suspiciously  
like a bent spoon~ 
claims it holds great power.  
Mostly it stirs the air  
into odd shapes  
that drift toward the door  
and forget why they left.

His shadow behaves better than he does~  
standing straighter,  
listening harder,  
trying to look regal  
while he fumbles with his cape  
and mutters about  
how terror used to mean something.

By nightfall,  
he sits on the floor,  
crown tilted,  
birds asleep on the windowsill,  
and admits he’s not much of a monarch.  
Fear refuses to obey him.  
Dreams wander off without permission.  
Even the spoon has lost interest.

Still, he stays~  
a gentle absurdity  
in a world that keeps insisting  
it needs a king  
for things it can’t explain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Smith nee Howarth Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 5:12 PM
A wonderfully surreal persona poem: its free-verse shape lets the images arrive with dreamlike ease, while the bent spoon, paper birds, and overly courteous giant create a tenderly comic monarch. Beneath the absurdity lies a lovely meditation on fear, authority, and the mysteries that refuse to be ruled.
Wolf Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 8:54 PM
Quite an imaginative and interesting topic, Sara. What a character you've created. I'm going to crown him 'King Shmendrick the First and Last.'
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