Southern Skies

Southern Skies Clouds burst a new rain. The golden sunlight glitters. Thus quenching drought’s pain. © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen December 7, 2009

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John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo

Date: 12/14/2009 7:46:00 AM

Perfect haiku and great title this write is something that way to many Haikus arent and that is warm and truley a great fast read get well soon

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 12/9/2009 6:17:00 PM

Dane Ann~ great description the way you put this together ,you've got mail! Laura :)

Date: 12/8/2009 1:50:00 PM

What in uplifting view. Good use of imagery. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind words on mine. Blessings to you. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/8/2009 6:31:00 AM

Another lovely haiku from your creative pen.. so very visual.. quenching my frosty chill this morning... blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup

James Peranteau

Date: 12/7/2009 7:01:00 AM

Beautiful poem Dane ! Even though we've had more than our share of rain this year ! james