Southern Belle

Within and without you
  Over, under, all about you
There's an aura of grace
  Of fragrance and lace

A Southern belle in your day
  Time takes not charm away
The hearts you've captured
  Yet swell with rapture

Your gait's a step slower
  You don't swivel your hips
Yet a coquettish smile
  Still plays 'bout your lips

Heed not the naysayers
  Who hold today's passed you by
The mere sound of your name
  ~ Manifest awe in my eye
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Laurie Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 10:37 PM
G'day Gershon … father time steals many things but not everything - thank you Gershon - Lindsay
Wolf Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 8:52 AM
So true. E.g., Father Time has been kind enough not to steal my yellow teeth! :) gw
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 10:54 AM
Lovely little poem with love, humour and wisdom! Congrats on your top win.
Wolf Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 1:46 PM
Thanks, Krish! Thanks for noticing! :) gw
Goldsmith Avatar
May 18, 2020 at 5:20 PM
Congratulations on your win. I would love a dress in that old dress style and be the belle of the ball. In the movies the dresses and ladies are so pretty. Enjoy your win and day.........
Wolf Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 1:45 PM
Yes, they were pretty, alright! Thanks, Paula. ~ gw
Kauffman Avatar
May 18, 2020 at 12:25 PM
Gershon, congratulations on your win! I can see this lovely lady through your words and, having deep southern roots, know many a Southern belle both young and young at heart who fit your description. Well done my friend!
Wolf Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 1:44 PM
Very nice of you, Sam, and congrats to you on your top-drawer win in the contest! ~ Wolfgang
Carber Avatar
May 18, 2020 at 11:53 AM
Congrats mate, on your 1st place win, and not just in this contest!
Wolf Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 1:42 PM
Thank you, L.J., and congrats to you too for your win! :) gw
Brewer Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 2:22 PM
Beautiful convincing love poem. Congratulations on your verses and your good fortune at having such a subject.
Wolf Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 8:17 PM
Thank YOU for your support and your kind words, Geoffrey! Cheers, Gershon
Kiser Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 1:47 PM
Wow, beautifully penned.
Wolf Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 2:14 PM
Thank you so much, M.L! :) gw
Lamoureux Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 7:45 AM
I really like the intimate feel of this piece Gershon. It seems she has grown into her beauty.
Wolf Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 2:14 PM
Thank you for such an insightful comment, Richard!
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