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South Wind

on bone chilling days
wet winter winds sigh and moan
grieving over you

Copyright © Tim Ryerson | Year Posted 2010

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Andrea Dietrich

March 27, 2010 at 12:37 PM

ok,now here is one I missed. The title helps complete this one for the theme of the contest, but the haiku itself stands on its own as a great poem of longing for someone. LUv, Andrea

Charmaine Chircop

February 14, 2010 at 4:03 PM

A good creative Haiku indeed..Charma

Robert A. Dufresne

January 31, 2010 at 6:01 PM

well said Tim and an excellent reason to welcome Spring. Good luck with this beauty. -Robert

January 31, 2010 at 8:41 AM

Best wishes in the contest Tim.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words and welcome comments today

January 30, 2010 at 4:52 PM

yes cold bed doesnot warm heart make...sigh.. Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 30, 2010 at 3:18 PM

Thank you Tim for entering my contest. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

January 30, 2010 at 11:37 AM

Terrific entry....the longing and the waiting are so true!! ~ Great job! ~ Carrie

Carolyn Devonshire

January 29, 2010 at 10:00 PM

This is such a beautiful haiku, Tim. I'm glad the coming of spring will help ease your loss. Much love, Carolyn

January 29, 2010 at 8:43 PM

I love your Haiku especially "grieve over you" ...good luck in the contest...Marty

January 29, 2010 at 7:34 PM

Wow, nice work Tim...this one speaks volumes...Raul

January 29, 2010 at 6:59 PM

I wish you good luck in Carol's "Waiting for Spring" Contest, Tim. Spring will bring a renewal, for sure. God bless. Peace, audrey

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