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love is the source of intercourse, between some mayhap, half relations, word of mouth does perchance force, wells break of direst fine stagnation:) Don Johnson

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John Freeman

Date: 10/26/2011 12:55:00 PM

You've got a mouth-full of truth here Don. Intercourse is of course love's relationship with life in it's purest sense. And idle words from empty hearts are like feortan in a whirlwind.... excuse the expression please. Love your perceptual verse Don, great job. Agape, Moses

Don Johnson
Date: 10/26/2011 2:33:00 PM

As i see, you respond just like me, to a verse that inquires a bit, the comments of the odd halfwit, can ring the bell so clearly, Great little poem Moses...

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/26/2011 11:04:00 AM

Cool write there Don. I love the incredible lines of ingenuity here in your write!! Wonderful job!!

Tony Lane

Date: 10/26/2011 4:57:00 AM

You're a romantic. Tony

Don Johnson
Date: 10/26/2011 2:36:00 PM

A dummie has to to do, write sumpthin with the dew, sweet romance was always my favourire...

Wole Francis

Date: 10/26/2011 4:44:00 AM

nice one Don.