Sour

Fooled again
Thinking that you could change
or be what you were
Thinking that this time
Things would be different

And I've become that girl
That I feared as a child
I've become that women
That's afraid to love

I feel so robbed
I feel so cheated

I'm a dreamer
I'm a believer
I believe in magic
I believe in true love

But my heart is so shattered
I can't put it back together

And I can't shake you
It's disgusting and sad
Thinking you my destiny
my soul mate gone sour

All I know is betrayal
All I know is lies
Is this my inspiration?
Is this how I survive?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Mcghee Avatar
November 17, 2008 at 6:28 AM
I can definitely relate; it's consistent with me. Absolutely loved it, devine!!! Thanks for the comment. Glad u liked and much appreciation!!!
Torres Avatar
November 9, 2008 at 10:21 PM
Athena I feel your pain. This is a very touching write. The love that you have has been betrayed and are full of empty promises. You will survive Jesus loves you call him into your heart he will fill the void. Please comment on my poems I would like to hear your opinions. Some one better will be brought to you ask God to heal your heart he is the great comforter. God bless you Im looking forward to your comments Michael Torres
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