Souper Bloopers

If the 'Soup' were a 'Soap'
and poems became suds,
Would one feel clean and refreshed
climbing out of the tub?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Duncan Avatar
June 24, 2013 at 2:56 PM
love it,,, very cute ;}
Cavanaugh Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 10:11 PM
LOL, Very clever.
Tsiluma Avatar
November 1, 2012 at 8:27 AM
Nice question Michelle! Mmmmmh, I guess some days you want to dive in and stay inside, and other days , you just brush through and quickly get out. But when you discover that one poem that makes you do a double take, then it's definitely refreshing.
Duncan Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 6:29 PM
cute, very cute ,,,, blessings of the day ;}
O'Leary Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 3:13 PM
I'm not sure... but your poem is certainly refreshing... nice job... Terry
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