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the perfectly polite lady who gracefully writes me daily whom i hope i will one day applaud when she reads us her poetry abroad the sister I've always wanted the same ever since she started she's said many prayers and she'll always be there to miss her is my brokenhearted my words to her are special we meet on the very same level and sometimes i say in a some sweet way "she's mine" when the day is special her words are furniture in my heart and flowers in vases and art the beautiful scenes the stars in between the clouds floating apart the warmth the fires glow the great spirit from with in that flows the someone that is when i needed a friend heavens answered prayer (To my favorite soup girl Carolyn Devonshire;)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/2/2010 8:20:00 AM
Great write expressing your thoughts about Carolyn..I have cooked some soup for you and it is done..Sara
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Date: 7/20/2010 7:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Carolyn has some superb friends who wrote for her in this contest. Glad to see this in the winner circle. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/20/2010 11:28:00 AM
Congrats John on your winning poem in the poetry pal contest ... enjoy your special moment in the winner circle.. with luv..
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Date: 7/20/2010 11:18:00 AM
Congratulations John iii on your win in African Asset's contest "Praise your poetrysoup pal". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/20/2010 10:28:00 AM
Big congratulations to you on your wonderful win in my contest, thanks for the support. You a simply a super Souper! Don’t drop your passionate pen, keep writing! With love, always, Adeleke
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Date: 7/14/2010 6:32:00 AM
Caroline is one my my best friends too,very special person.. My sister too:)so that makes you my brother John:)..Lovely tribute to a great woman//Celene
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Date: 7/6/2010 5:37:00 AM
great trubute!!
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Date: 7/4/2010 10:12:00 PM
A sweet and loving dedication coming from the heart. The Lord always answers prayers and starts friendships where he thinks it will blossom and grow. Beautifully expressed John. God Bless you friend. Phyl
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Date: 7/2/2010 10:41:00 AM
A very moving dedication that expresses your warm friendship so beautifully, John. You should enter this in the "Soup Pal" contest! Blessings and love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/1/2010 10:39:00 PM
Sweet devotional dedication.
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Date: 7/1/2010 10:02:00 PM
john, is this who I think it is. YOu should say her name at the bottom. yes, she is a wonderful friend to you. THis is an awesome poem! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/1/2010 4:03:00 PM
A beautiful poem and dedication John, you are such a sweet man. She is such a lucky soup girl, 2 have such a devotinol friend. Loved your poem.-Skat
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Date: 7/1/2010 2:36:00 PM
Nice poem John. More comments in Soup Mail. Joe
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Date: 7/1/2010 2:02:00 PM
such a sweet dedication to your dear friend,, lovely and thoughtful..P.D.
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