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Findings of friends in this hot soup Steamy weather, a pigeons coop Lean on my eyeballs Ill SEE What I can do? before the sky Falls in on YOU

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Beata Agustin

Date: 1/11/2024 11:31:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A

Date: 9/9/2015 2:06:00 PM

Heydon, thank you for sharing. A pleasure to read... SKAT

Susan Palli

Date: 12/15/2010 9:22:00 AM

I enjoyed that.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/15/2010 7:17:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup Heydon. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)