Soup

Findings of friends in this hot soup
Steamy weather, a pigeons coop
Lean on my eyeballs
Ill SEE What I can do?
before the sky Falls in on YOU
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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artlyy Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 8:28 AM
I've really been enjoying your story your characters and storytelling are fantastic. Honestly, I think it would work incredibly well as a manga or webtoon and could help you reach an even bigger audience. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il: [email protected] inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 11:31 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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September 9, 2015 at 2:06 PM
Heydon, thank you for sharing. A pleasure to read... SKAT
Palli Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 9:22 AM
I enjoyed that.
Brown Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 7:17 AM
Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup Heydon. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)
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