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Sounds To Sleep By

~ Sounds To Sleep By ~ A Poem by Debbie_Philly Sounds To Sleep By The sirens pierce through me like a sharpened dagger something is smoldering in this small corner of my city the neighborhood is dowsed in dark and treacherous acts I sit on my bed wondering which direction they're coming from should I duck from the window, will this be the night that a stray bullet rips through my flesh like a hungry angry violent virus. The same virus that has claimed so many lives young and old too many to count to this date, WHAT IS THIS ****!!! I thought I was immune to the sounds. I hear them all the time While I watch TV, when I eat , as I write, in my sleep…….. For some reason tonight is different tonight I feel it too damned deep…. through my thick skin as it penetrates my soul seeping through my lungs,stifling the fears I can no longer express unable to scream.. STOP !!! Tonight I feel it just too damned deep . By : Deborah Mills Kelly ( Debbie Philly) Revised Version... original written about 3 years ago :) 9/18/2011

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Date: 3/12/2014 2:36:00 AM
Very serious- captured the essence of this unstable world in these insecure times.<3
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Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 3/24/2014 1:08:00 AM
Thank you so much Momma ... your option and reading my words means allot !! <3 :)
Date: 2/5/2014 4:57:00 AM
From a NYC-"Harlemite" to a Philly-Girl"..."I feel you"! Love this write! Just one small observation DM-K, "...direction their coming from...", the word their, should not the word be the contraction "they're"? None-the-less, This is a favorite of mine! Very nostalgic for me, and "I Love It"!!!...:-) xoxoxo//Robert
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Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/5/2014 1:25:00 PM
Thank you so much Robert really for the wonderful comment... yes Philly/NYC... we know those night sounds don't we... unfortunately. I also appreciate you letting me know about the English bloopers... I have a problem some times with self editing...lol and maybe a brush up on my English . Thank you again so much !! :)
Date: 2/4/2014 7:58:00 PM
Jesus Debbie, they get better and better and better! I love it Debbie, another deep and powerful write. I love it! :) xoxo
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Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/5/2014 1:26:00 PM
Thank you again Chris... I love seeing you here.. I promised to be by again for you !! :) :)

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