Sounds of Soul --My Lovely Children

Birds open the dawn with an offbeat show
Drop a many colored cherry at my window

I pick it up and look at it with a great surprise
It is purple, white and blue, -- with vivid eyes

I hardly guess it signifies my most precious gift
That would give our flat mood quite a high lift

Such things happen only once in a blue moon
When you see a host of kicks coming too soon

At noon is born the pearl of our conjoined dance
Fair, dimpled, thick hair, -- we look on in a trance

A daughter, la hija, fille, our ‘meye’ in Bengali
A sun is smiling seated on the ripe strawberry

It brings a beauty tide in the entire household
Every inch of hectic hours goes lovelier manifold

Baby cot, feeding bottle, medicine, swing, lullaby
Toil for bread, -- time flies in the blink of an eye

Gradually grows the baby, -- into a brook-like child
Nice view of growing girl sometimes a flower wild

In the shade of teachers, parents and grand parents
Unfolds her study, personality along with merriment

Old leaves drop at home, arrives drought and flood
Adaptation flows in deep, -- in the maturing blood

This is time, life, world and family all on the move
Mirth mingling with tears in its every groove

The tree is old and laden with many a sound of soul
The offspring is now a sunny lady focused on her goal 
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February 18, 2016
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Gentry Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 5:50 PM
Congratulations on your win! This is excellent. Imagery with nature and a father's love. A 7
Gupta Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 1:11 AM
Thank you...
Smith Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 9:24 AM
I know "the tree old and laden" part. Congratulations!
Gupta Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 1:12 AM
Thank you...
Selfa Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 9:01 AM
Congratulations Probir on your spectacular win! Keep it up and there will be more placements to come! :) _HANS
Gupta Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 1:12 AM
Thank you...
A   Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 12:06 AM
Probir, Congratulations on your wonderful win. ~LINDA~
Gupta Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 2:34 AM
Have been lookin forward to...... Thank you......
Roper Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 4:59 PM
Your write is so touching most beautiful lovely memories Congratulations on your “My Lovely Children” contest win, Probir!!! Hugs Eve
Gupta Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 8:42 PM
Thank you...
Allison Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 3:03 PM
beautifully written Probir I am loving reading these poems and so lovely to see the father daughter relationship poems:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Gupta Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 8:44 PM
Thank you that you like the poem
Turner Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 2:56 PM
I love the style in which you talk about your beautiful daughter. A father's pride and love flowing from your pen. Congratulations on both. Peace my friend:)
Gupta Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 8:45 PM
Peace... Thank you
Scars Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 12:21 PM
Probir, congrats on your placement in my contest and thanks for the entry :)-luloo *smiles*
Gupta Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 8:47 PM
Thanks for the kind placement...
Hicks Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 2:35 AM
This was a colorful piece. I like how it seemed to me, as the seasons were changing, your daughter was getting older, with all the complimentary nature imagery. Good writing.
Gupta Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 4:59 AM
Yes, sentiments around diverse associations in the course of the interesting parenting journey and the sense of an overall integrity thereupon inviting the nature imagery as metaphor. Thank you.......
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