Sounds In Shades

I bleed I bleed
- no pain you felt
I cried I cried
- no tears you melt.

I smiled I smiled
- no charm you shade
I whispered I whispered
- no thought you made.

I bleed I smiled
- no ***** you ensured
I cried I whispered
- no words you composed.

I waited I waited
-no trauma you pored
I misled I misled
- no storm you foretold.

I bided I bided
- no shadow you cajoled
I hoped I hoped
- no fortune you assured.

I waited I bided
- no hands you waved
I missed I hoped
- no faith you devoted.

I bleed I bleed
- no pain you felt
I cried I cried
- no tears you melt.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 16, 2010 at 5:49 PM
Wow, I like the rewording,, very strong write,, enjoyed this one..P.D.
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July 16, 2010 at 1:51 PM
I love this! excellent Thanks for sharing - Jodie Q
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