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Sounds In Shades

I bleed I bleed - no pain you felt I cried I cried - no tears you melt. I smiled I smiled - no charm you shade I whispered I whispered - no thought you made. I bleed I smiled - no ***** you ensured I cried I whispered - no words you composed. I waited I waited -no trauma you pored I misled I misled - no storm you foretold. I bided I bided - no shadow you cajoled I hoped I hoped - no fortune you assured. I waited I bided - no hands you waved I missed I hoped - no faith you devoted. I bleed I bleed - no pain you felt I cried I cried - no tears you melt.

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Date: 7/16/2010 5:49:00 PM
Wow, I like the rewording,, very strong write,, enjoyed this one..P.D.
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Date: 7/16/2010 1:51:00 PM
I love this! excellent Thanks for sharing - Jodie Q
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