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Sounds discordant around abound We instantly react Likewise for fearful thoughts that hound Tranquility detract Aversion and desire Send to funeral pyre Be free, aglow, afire Crow’s caw mordant Sounds discordant 28-November-2021 Quietus

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Date: 11/30/2021 9:40:00 PM
I like every bit of this one "Send to funeral pyre Be free, aglow, afire" Especially that part.
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Date: 11/28/2021 10:04:00 AM
So well written. It has a sound of its own whilst reading it.
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Date: 11/28/2021 8:11:00 PM
Thanks, Victor!
Date: 11/27/2021 9:02:00 PM
Nicely done and meaningful!
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Date: 11/27/2021 9:20:00 PM
Thank you, Kim! Happy you dropped by

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