Bernardo F. Asuncion Poet Haiku

sound of the tide hiku

For Sir Brian Strand's 1396 Poetry Contest 

15 July 2025 


                 s        c
             y               r
        a       ~    ~  ~     a
     r      ~   ~  ~    ~ ~   ~ s
   p    ~  ~    ~ ~  ~    ~ ~    h    
 s   ~   ~  ~  ~ ~  ~     ~   ~       in rhythm
 ~~~   ~   ~~~~~ ~~~   ~~
  ~~~   ~   ~~~~~ ~~~   ~~          u  n
  ~~~   ~   ~ ~~~   ~~      with a  t         e   against the rocks  ~~^o.0o[]
  ~~~   ~~~~~  ~~~~~~~~   ~~~~
 ~~~~ ~~~~~~~~  ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~                ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
  ~~~~~~   ~~~~~~~  ~~~~~~~~    as saltbreeze whistles   >>>&#
      ~~~~~~~~   ~~~~~~~~
   ~~~~~~~~~~~  ~~~ ~~~~
        ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~
                   ~~~~~~
                           ~

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Ghairo Daniels July 18, 2025 at 4:43 AM Outstanding! Time 4 your book on this form, Bernard. Continued Light. X. Bernardo F. Asuncion July 18, 2025 at 2:13 PM Thanks, dear poet Ghairo. That's a good thing to consider. Love~BFA

sara Etgen-Baker July 14, 2025 at 4:38 PM what an image you created....perfect! Bernardo F. Asuncion July 14, 2025 at 4:44 PM Much thanks, dear Ma'am Sara. Your words are sweetly encouraging. With love~BFA.