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Soul-Torn

soul-torn trees   forlorn
will never be    ever   green
too much rain    too   late

For Brian Strand's YOUR VERSE AGAIN
any theme/any form max of 12 lines Poetry Contest

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Skat A

May 16, 2015 at 11:15 AM

Yes, I am readind pd's comment. Bothering you. SKAT

Harry Horsman

December 6, 2012 at 9:37 AM

hey this little wonder is awesome, love it....

Poet Destroyer A

February 12, 2012 at 2:53 AM

ha ha... i did this one on pourpose... i have nothing better to do... than bother you.. congrats in Brian's... contest... lol.. did you know that everytime I write Brian's.. name.. I have to go back and spell it right.. for some reason.. I typo it as.. BRAIN.. ha ha.. get it.. BRian. the Brains... well i better go.. and check out other poems... take care..Andrea...always..pd

Bob Quigley

February 7, 2012 at 10:17 PM

Congrats Andrea. Nice Haiku

Jon Arno

February 7, 2012 at 5:08 PM

Congratulations Andrea for you win in the contest. Great little write. Have a great evening. Jon

Kash Poet

February 5, 2011 at 10:39 AM

Like it --wonderful image!--kash

Skat A

April 18, 2010 at 1:05 PM

To bad about the contest, you still have a good one here, enjoyed thank you IRMA

Charmaine Chircop

April 18, 2010 at 7:59 AM

What a beauty..dear friend and even its title..going to my favs..Charma

Gert W. Knop

April 18, 2010 at 6:44 AM

Nicely observed and written, Andrea! We had too much snow this year but luckily no inundation. But some trees were uprooted in earlier autumn storms. Love, Gert

Doris Culverhouse

April 17, 2010 at 6:00 PM

enjoyed anyway--I did that the other day and missed a contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 17, 2010 at 2:41 PM

U gotta be quick for Raul's contests as they fill up in a hurry and close almost as soon as they show up on the contest page. this was a great entry if u could have gotten it in on time... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Lynette Chachere

April 17, 2010 at 2:29 PM

trees are so interesting.especially the older ones. they're like phenomenons of nature. and for people to cut them down is almost too tragic. -Always&Forever LYnette

Skat A

April 17, 2010 at 1:40 PM

Hi, Andrea how are you in this rainy weather. It is raining pretttty bad over her. Almost like your Haiku. Sad gloomy lonely over here in Texas. Sorry U missed the contest. Irma