Souls and Sacred Hearts

Timely sifting, sets slowly drifting lofty apart, aloof of sort as lost ships, in tidal dips as ocean attests, perils at best sortie Est, sortie Quest Through a remembered gate, serpent’s dream abates love’s reasoning renewed, ego’s reasoning eschew the garden that parts, by two reasonings sorts the soul of flesh, from sacred heart in stash begin again, O man of sin stored wisdom is cash, of heaven’s stash wisdom of counterfeit, as though a serpent’s ego spit unleavened reasoning vs the reasoning with seasoning, the cost not less than all, the serpent’s gall... the ego spit, that caused the split A soul becomes gold, by his protocol bold a soul is made bold, of the sacred mold timely sifting, ends all drifting through remembered gate, love’s will abates ego’s oblations, of satanic orientations Selah Inspired by TS Eliot poem “The Remembered Gate”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 1/17/2016 8:27:00 AM
"A soul becomes gold, by his protocol bold a soul is made bold, of the sacred mold" What a beauty you have painted in this deep poem. Sorry for visiting PS and your page after a very long time dear friend but reading your poems are always a joy. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
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Date: 6/24/2015 2:02:00 AM
Lovely write, a soul becomes gold, a soul made bold how uplifting, I have been made even more bold than before, I have taken my lyric poems and actually sang them and put them on you tube also reading dome poetry out aloud on my you tube channel, had over a 100 views and even have 3 subscriber's, God is definitely doing good.
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