Soulmate Mistake

Lover,
To mother,
And another,
And another,
And another,
Until you realize,
They were never your lover.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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De Beaulieu Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 3:30 PM
Hello Fire Bird, yes that would be a mistake. my friend. enjoy your evening. ?Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 11:14 AM
Hello Fire Bird, yes it would happen a lot. Enjoy your day my friend. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene./
Bird Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 4:25 PM
Yes, its sad, but it happens a lot. - Phoenix :)
Greenhough Avatar
October 25, 2023 at 1:34 PM
Not confusing at all. Lol. Married twice on his terms. Nothing for me.
Bird Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 12:39 PM
I'm glad you understand! - Phoenix :)
Poet Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 1:16 PM
Phoenix, despite the fact that I enjoy the rhyme and the repeated lines. I find the subject matter to be quite obscure.
Bird Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 1:18 PM
This poem is about abusive relationships, I wish they never happen, but they do sometime. - Phoenix
Buhagiar Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 10:58 PM
I found this poem enigmatic. Blessings.
Bird Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 12:11 AM
Hi Victor, thank you for commenting, it is supposed to be bit confusing. - Phoenix :)
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