Soulmate Mistake

Lover, To mother, And another, And another, And another, Until you realize, They were never your lover.

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Date: 12/3/2023 3:30:00 PM

Hello Fire Bird, yes that would be a mistake. my friend. enjoy your evening. ?Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/4/2023 11:14:00 AM

Hello Fire Bird, yes it would happen a lot. Enjoy your day my friend. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene./

Fire Bird
Date: 12/3/2023 4:25:00 PM

Yes, its sad, but it happens a lot. - Phoenix :)

Date: 10/25/2023 1:34:00 PM

Not confusing at all. Lol. Married twice on his terms. Nothing for me.

Fire Bird
Date: 10/27/2023 12:39:00 PM

I'm glad you understand! - Phoenix :)

Date: 10/23/2023 1:16:00 PM

Phoenix, despite the fact that I enjoy the rhyme and the repeated lines. I find the subject matter to be quite obscure.

Fire Bird
Date: 10/23/2023 1:18:00 PM

This poem is about abusive relationships, I wish they never happen, but they do sometime. - Phoenix

Date: 10/22/2023 10:58:00 PM

I found this poem enigmatic. Blessings.

Fire Bird
Date: 10/23/2023 12:11:00 AM

Hi Victor, thank you for commenting, it is supposed to be bit confusing. - Phoenix :)