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Soulmate

Since the first time I lay my heart's eyes on you, Oration of my love story began; we became the main characters United together in warm, obsessing passion. Energy we create can Light a city; ahhh.....yes, an energy created by pulsation of our heart-beats. My mind always thinks about you; every Atom that makes who you are is like a star in the night sky. As a hobby, sky-gazing Transformed to gazing in your eyes, to get a glimpse of the stars of Every character, beauty, and charm that defines you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/2/2018 12:23:00 PM
Teddy.. Congrats on being a featured poet this week. This poem is certainly worthy of that recognition. Blessings! Come see me...
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Date: 10/9/2014 10:02:00 AM
Well penned acrostic, Teddy, congrats on the win
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/9/2014 10:09:00 AM
Thank you very much for your applause Dr. Ram Mehta! :-)
Date: 10/9/2014 8:35:00 AM
Your Acrostic sounds like true love Teddy. Congratulations on your win.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/9/2014 10:08:00 AM
Thank you for your kind applause Brenda! ^_^
Date: 10/8/2014 4:05:00 PM
Very nice, Teddy. Congrats for your win.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/8/2014 11:54:00 PM
Thank you for your applause Andrea! ^_^
Date: 10/8/2014 11:03:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Teddy :-) hugs Jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/8/2014 11:53:00 PM
Thank you Jan! ^_^
Date: 10/4/2014 2:24:00 PM
Beautifully penned acrostic - great descriptive write:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/6/2014 6:31:00 AM
Thanks Jan! ^_^

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