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Soul To Take

My Soul To Take

“Now I lay me down to sleep
I pray the Lord my soul to keep.
And if I die before I wake
I pray the Lord my soul to take”.

She walked me right up to it
and then she walked me through it.
As I hung on words she'd say
the prayer my mom taught me to pray.

Then as I lay me down to sleep
I'd hear her as she'd softly weep.
How can this be? We prayed we prayed.
Still her torment. It just stayed.

Sneaking through the house that night
to stay with her til morning light.
Visions of me the hero in my head
I climbed so quietly in her bed.

Not one sound made, no not one peep.
I pray the Lord my soul to keep.
Stealth I guess I'd always lack.
As mother held the covers back.

Both are safe now for awhile
tears replaced by sleepy smile.
And if I die before I wake
I knew my mothers heart would break.

So keep us safe Lord her and I
within Your grace don't let us die.
But if You need for heavens sake
Here am I Lord Yours to take.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Konos Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 3:51 PM
Well "looky there" it's Edwin....back on Soup.....I'm singing Etta James Song..."At Last"......
Konos Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 10:31 AM
Congratulations Edwin...May all your blue shirts deserve Starch!
Kissel Avatar
June 21, 2015 at 2:03 PM
Edwin, A lovely poem. Congrats on the win. Lanette Kissel
A  Avatar
June 21, 2015 at 1:43 AM
This is a nice win
A   Avatar
June 21, 2015 at 1:04 AM
Edwin, congratulations on your Prayer time Memory win. LINDA
Mitchell Avatar
June 20, 2015 at 8:10 PM
Congratulations, Edwin. You did a fabulous job of capturing the reasoning of a young boy climbing into his mother's bed. Boys. the ever-chivalrous. :)
Konos Avatar
June 20, 2015 at 6:05 PM
Congratulations Edwin....
Allison Avatar
June 20, 2015 at 7:42 AM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) So lovely to share the podium with you Edwin:-) hugs Jan xx
Kiser Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 7:58 AM
Moving and powerful; that's quite a different take on an old prayer.
Hofert Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 8:11 AM
Thank you M. L. God bless!!
Pinet Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 8:26 AM
Sad sentiments and a graceful approach to the meaning brought to our lives through prayer. Emile.
Hofert Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 9:22 AM
It's not the direction I planned to take. But I know as a poet, you know how that goes sometimes. You just have to follow your heart. Thank you sir and God bless. Ed
Allison Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 6:50 AM
a lovely spiritual write Edwin:-) Hugs Jan xx
Hofert Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 9:22 AM
Thank you as always Island girl. :)
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