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8/16/2024 for Soul Speak Poetry Contest sponsored by Unseeking Seeker

Flowing streams, tangerines, sunset dreams, bright smiles gleam - my life is complete. Whistles dwell inside seashells. Birds like bells cast love spells - must be God's heartbeat.

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/16/2024 3:00:00 PM

I like this, especially the last line. It has true talent.

David Crandall
Date: 8/18/2024 10:19:00 AM

Oops, where's my brain...credit where credit is due, "God's heartbeat" I stole from Unseeking Seeker's contest instructions. What a drip I am - lol.

David Crandall
Date: 8/16/2024 4:58:00 PM

Thanks Hilda. To give credit where credit is due, I stole the "God's heartbeat" phrase from Ink Empress's contest instructions - lol.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 8/16/2024 11:17:00 AM

Hello David, What a delightful read and I love the ending. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

David Crandall
Date: 8/16/2024 4:56:00 PM

Thanks Daniel!