David Crandall Poet Rhyme

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8/16/2024 for Soul Speak Poetry Contest sponsored by Unseeking Seeker

Soul Speak

Flowing streams,
tangerines,
sunset dreams,
bright smiles gleam - 
my life is complete. 

Whistles dwell
inside seashells.
Birds like bells
cast love spells - 
must be God's heartbeat.

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Hilda Greenhough August 16, 2024 at 3:00 PM I like this, especially the last line. It has true talent. David Crandall August 18, 2024 at 10:19 AM Oops, where's my brain...credit where credit is due, "God's heartbeat" I stole from Unseeking Seeker's contest instructions. What a drip I am - lol. David Crandall August 16, 2024 at 4:58 PM Thanks Hilda. To give credit where credit is due, I stole the "God's heartbeat" phrase from Ink Empress's contest instructions - lol.

Daniel Henry Rodgers August 16, 2024 at 11:17 AM Hello David, What a delightful read and I love the ending. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel David Crandall August 16, 2024 at 4:56 PM Thanks Daniel!