Soul Serious

no one thought i was ill,i asked myself two questions,do they know how i feel?,do they
know about these pills?,i thought there was no cure,they said i was crazy,I'm not making
up excuses,my body is tired and lazy,they said I'm not social,how could i be?,your words
made me emotional,i wont entertain your negativity,desperate to be heard,even then you
couldn't see
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Spence Sr Avatar
October 22, 2008 at 6:43 PM
This is an interesting piece. Actually, no one knows your body like you do. Great job and welcome to Poetry Soup! ~Joseph
Dewalt Avatar
October 21, 2008 at 11:16 PM
You know how you feel and when others say you are crazy and not ill, it will make you crazy. Loved this.
Higgins Avatar
October 20, 2008 at 10:56 AM
Beautiful write. I love how the pain and need to be heard is conveyed. The poem exposes itself really well and draws in the reader.
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