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Soul Serious

no one thought i was ill,i asked myself two questions,do they know how i feel?,do they know about these pills?,i thought there was no cure,they said i was crazy,I'm not making up excuses,my body is tired and lazy,they said I'm not social,how could i be?,your words made me emotional,i wont entertain your negativity,desperate to be heard,even then you couldn't see

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/22/2008 6:43:00 PM
This is an interesting piece. Actually, no one knows your body like you do. Great job and welcome to Poetry Soup! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/21/2008 11:16:00 PM
You know how you feel and when others say you are crazy and not ill, it will make you crazy. Loved this.
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Date: 10/20/2008 10:56:00 AM
Beautiful write. I love how the pain and need to be heard is conveyed. The poem exposes itself really well and draws in the reader.
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