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Soul Searching

There is the light in your soul Something deep, deep inside That you want to hide Because its your precious guide People are curious and cruel They want to reveal The treasure they will steal And you will never heal The part of you will be gone You will never be whole If you let them unroll The valuable secrets of your soul

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Bl Devnath

Date: 2/5/2013 10:27:00 AM

Lovely expressed about searching Soul. Thanks for your comment on my write. Loved always, bl

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/25/2013 12:01:00 PM

If we reveal the secrets to the right person, the magic of us spills forth. The tricky part is finding the right one and having the courage to open up. I like your poem, it made me think.

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/25/2013 9:31:00 AM

love this, such profoundness in your beautiful words...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/25/2013 5:22:00 AM

Great one that you have penned..There is a part that one should keep locked up and not share..Enjoyed reading ..Sara

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 1/25/2013 3:19:00 AM

Thought provoking write Vesna! It's what's inside that mankind truly guides for fear that exposure might lead to heartbreak. You've said it very well.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/20/2013 1:54:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Yes, I feel that there are somethings that should be kept inside to never be let loose..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/20/2013 9:18:00 AM

This made me think, Vesna-- yes I agree that there is this light within our souls that we try to keep safe-- I like that thought, of it being our guide... but sometimes, I believe that a sliver of that light breaks free, and others see it and hopefully use that light not to tear you apart but to make you glow more. Sorry I hope I am making sense. Thank you for passing by my poems!