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Soul Satisfaction

"live your best life today for tomorrow is uncertain. You may even die"

sold shop at seventy for soul satisfaction - run over by car

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Pashang Salehi

September 8, 2020 at 5:12 PM

“You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough.”

Rama Balasubramanian

September 8, 2020 at 7:58 PM

Your taking time off to comment on my work is much appreciated. Take care. Warm regards, Rama

Rama Balasubramanian

September 8, 2020 at 7:03 PM

I believe in rebirth. But if we live right there will be no rebirth.

Andrea Dietrich

August 30, 2020 at 2:48 PM

good one, Rama. It does happen this way for some very unlucky souls.

Rama Balasubramanian

August 30, 2020 at 7:37 PM

Death is sudden. If he hadn't waited till 70, he might have had a more satisfying life. Positive appreciation from great poet like you makes my day. Thanks for the same. Take care. Warm regards Rama

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 29, 2020 at 1:17 PM

- Congratulations on your great winning line, Rama :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Rama Balasubramanian

August 29, 2020 at 8:20 PM

Thanks and same to you.Take care. Stay blessed. Warm regards, Rama

Eve Roper

August 29, 2020 at 10:53 AM

Great imagery in just two line Monoku,Rama. Congratulations on your win.

Rama Balasubramanian

August 29, 2020 at 8:19 PM

Thanks and same to you.Take care. Stay blessed. Warm regards, Rama

Rama Balasubramanian

August 29, 2020 at 8:19 PM

Thanks and same to you.Take care. Stay blessed. Warm regards, Rama

Rama Balasubramanian

August 29, 2020 at 11:58 AM

Praise by great poet like you makes my day. Thanks and same to you. My first attempt at this form. Take care. Stay blessed. Warm regards, Rama

Line Gauthier

August 29, 2020 at 4:54 AM

Congrats, Rama ~ well penned

Rama Balasubramanian

August 29, 2020 at 6:37 AM

Thanks sir. positive appreciation from great poet like you is very uplifting. It makes my day. Congratulations to you too. Take care. Warm regards, Rama

Krish Radhakrishna

August 29, 2020 at 4:51 AM

Congrats on your win with good alliteration!! Struck lifeless by Sedan!! :)

Rama Balasubramanian

August 29, 2020 at 6:34 AM

Thanks and same to you. Tried but couldn't do complete alliteration. Message has to go in 17 syllabus. Next time I know where to go for help:) Take care. Warm regards Rama