Soul Journey

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As God spark, His vital essence Born in the domain of love and light Vibrant and blissful in self-luminescence Ineffable and boundless was our soul’s delight That we be as He, we were bestowed free will Signalling our empowerment to co-create That reflecting divine light, all voids fill So it was till heart began to agitate Drifting away from God’s script Heart’s desire chose its own course Separation from source, set soul adrift Dwelling in delusion, until choosing remorse Feeling separate from source, our delusion For no sooner we lay to rest ego desire Soul forges with God’s light, fusion We be to become bliss, all afire 27-November-2021

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/27/2021 1:08:00 AM

Soul forges with God’s light, This is how it should be.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/27/2021 5:38:00 AM

Known, when be be and so become

L Milton Hankins

Date: 11/26/2021 7:51:00 PM

This is an outstanding, lovely piece of writing, Unseeking Seeker, full of truth and light. Ah, how we have drifted from God's script, assuming that he/she may have had one balanced with a healthy helping of free will. Who can know?

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/26/2021 8:00:00 PM

Thanks Milton! This clear recognition dawned today in the morning, as soon as I awoke