Soul Exposed

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I'm scared I don't fathom my soul With sense, I may not have control. Perhaps I'll ne'er see it clearly Lord, kindly have mercy on me. The truth that lies beneath this sham, Do I break my heart like a dam? Am I one who loves, or beastly Lord, kindly have mercy on me. At times I'm a sear flood of tears. Always bleeding drowning in fears. Awed heart, a soul that can't foresee Lord, kindly have mercy on me.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/2/2023 5:27:00 AM

Ahh!! I like this spiritually based work that you have penned. God always has mercy on all men but do men accept that mercy. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/2/2023 5:09:00 AM

At times I'm a sear flood of tears. Always bleeding drowning in fears--- Your poem sounds like a prayers yearning for blessings. Well done, my friend.