Soul

This night I froze 
In thoughts of you
Beneath the soil
I bid you adiue 
A love so short
And not life long
You still live in me
A sad lovers song
I reach for you
In darkest hour
Emptiness I sense
No longer empowered
For your soul is gone
My dearest love
The angels took you
So high above 
No more you suffer
Or feel the pain
But you live in me
My hearts gain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Scott Avatar
June 9, 2024 at 9:17 PM
A quite touching poem :) S x
Rose  Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 4:23 AM
When someone lives in us, they never truly go away, we only have to close our eyes and open our hearts and they are there. Beautiful !
White Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 6:59 PM
Thank you so much MR, Kelli
Rodgers Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 6:11 AM
Dear Kelli, your poem is deeply filled with its heartfelt expression of love, loss, and longing. The poignant imagery and emotional depth convey the profound impact of losing a loved one, yet finding peace in their enduring presence within the heart. Your amazing words capture the bittersweet essence of remembrance and the eternal bond shared with the departed. This is a touching tribute. - Blessings, Daniel
White Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 6:13 AM
Thank you very much Daniel, kelli
Mo Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 12:34 AM
Sometimes the ones we love the most leave us so soon...they no longer feel the pain but they leave us in it. Greatly expressed
White Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 6:18 AM
Yes it is true, they leave their mark, thank you kelli
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