Soul

This night I froze In thoughts of you Beneath the soil I bid you adiue A love so short And not life long You still live in me A sad lovers song I reach for you In darkest hour Emptiness I sense No longer empowered For your soul is gone My dearest love The angels took you So high above No more you suffer Or feel the pain But you live in me My hearts gain

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/2/2024 4:23:00 AM

When someone lives in us, they never truly go away, we only have to close our eyes and open our hearts and they are there. Beautiful !

Kelli White
Date: 3/19/2024 6:59:00 PM

Thank you so much MR, Kelli

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/1/2024 6:11:00 AM

Dear Kelli, your poem is deeply filled with its heartfelt expression of love, loss, and longing. The poignant imagery and emotional depth convey the profound impact of losing a loved one, yet finding peace in their enduring presence within the heart. Your amazing words capture the bittersweet essence of remembrance and the eternal bond shared with the departed. This is a touching tribute. - Blessings, Daniel

Kelli White
Date: 3/1/2024 6:13:00 AM

Thank you very much Daniel, kelli

Marugu Mo

Date: 3/1/2024 12:34:00 AM

Sometimes the ones we love the most leave us so soon...they no longer feel the pain but they leave us in it. Greatly expressed

Kelli White
Date: 3/1/2024 6:18:00 AM

Yes it is true, they leave their mark, thank you kelli