Sorry Violet, Not the Love Poem You Wanted To Hear

Roses have to be RED.
Your VIOLETS are actually purple.
If I take out a splash of BLUE,
I just might, fall in LOVE with you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Strand Avatar
August 11, 2009 at 4:09 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Tim.Rgds Brian
Jordan Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 4:28 PM
Interesting poem Tin - God Bless, MJ
Brown Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 2:33 PM
awwwww Tin just got to love your heart felt writing. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 1:39 PM
Different. Sara
Christian Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 1:35 PM
aww sweet and different, why do we say violets are blue when they are actually a deep purple, mmmm even i write violets are blue, God bless you,
Chircop Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 1:26 PM
and i fell in love with this poem-sweet and a pleasure to read--well penned--charma
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