Steve Williams Poet I do not know?

Sorry Guys

Sorry Guys 


It was that second the world stood still
I heard a sound, I heard it shrill
I felt the thud, I felt the burn
I felt the sting, I felt the turn
The ground came up and I went down
A fighting man about to drown
I gasped for air, I gasped for voice
I felt the blood, I felt it moist
I heard a scream, I saw a face
I felt my heart, I felt the pace
The panic came, but not the pain
For this my friend we couldn’t train

I heard the voices, shrouded though
I heard them come, I heard them go
I heard the voice of a girl, I think?
She’s shouting me, shouting loud
I’m the centre of a crowd

They pick me up, I feel the fade
I feel the whoosh of the transport blade
I see the bag plug to the arm
I hear her voice, it keeps me calm

But I'm not going, to where they think I am
Sorry guys for spoilt plan 


Steve Williams 2011

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Eve Roper December 29, 2014 at 10:24 AM Steve, this is incredible, a moment of panic, but you’re not ready to go. I am not a swimmer, but I have almost drowned a couple of times in my younger years, people being stupid and throw me in the pool or lake and the feeling are so unreal. Blessings and Happy New Year

Poet Destroyer A December 20, 2014 at 4:15 PM Steve, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "WINTER POEMS" in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy the Christmas Holidays! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen December 11, 2014 at 5:35 AM - Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Steve - I choose your first great and well written free verse - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)