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Sorry For the First Fight 2013

Nervous in my sleep Passed the year with boiling heart Pushed down the anger Hide in detention Feel moody in the morning I know you are mad Feel sorry to hear The things you try not to say But slipped already We drown on emo But hurry stood on our sane Forgave each other I'm glad it was you Person who chased on my days The love of my life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/7/2013 5:30:00 AM
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Enjoyed reading this morn..I am glad that I chose this one..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/7/2013 6:33:00 PM
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Thank you Sara, glad to have you here :D
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John Posey
Date: 1/7/2013 5:01:00 AM
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Mighty fine Haiku here... You have penned it very well. This one is near textbook Haiku..... Jake
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/7/2013 6:33:00 PM
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Hehe, thanks Jake, cute comment :D
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/3/2013 11:44:00 AM
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well, it sounds like you MADE UP and that is marvelous. I too enjoyed that last haiku the most!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/3/2013 5:26:00 PM
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Thank hou Andrea, the last line is also my favourite too :D
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Vicky Tsiluma
Date: 1/2/2013 9:35:00 AM
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Well penned Yanny! It's always wise to resolve issues quickly so that peace and harmony can be maintained. Nicely done!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/3/2013 5:21:00 PM
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Thank you Viky, i have the same thoughts as you :D -hug, yanny
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 1/2/2013 8:23:00 AM
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Very nice haiku; Thanks for sharing with us. happy new Year. Lucilla
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/2/2013 8:53:00 AM
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Thanks Luci :D happy new year too :D
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Jon A Cavanaugh
Date: 1/1/2013 8:38:00 PM
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I love your 3rd Haiku. The way you have expressed this common faux pas is priceless. Bravo!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/1/2013 8:42:00 PM
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Thanks Jon, it's a pleasure to have a visit by you :) happy new year :D
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Date: 1/1/2013 8:08:00 PM
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Did not know a Haiku could be that long.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/1/2013 8:11:00 PM
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No, actually haiku is only 3 lines, this just like the chains of haiku, a little modification of it :)
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 1/1/2013 12:26:00 PM
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Glad you said sorry so quick, pity about the fight though xx
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/1/2013 4:40:00 PM
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Glad that we never took the fight so long, and regrets why happened in the night of new year eve :p

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