Yanny Widjanarko Poet Haiku

Sorry For the First Fight 2013

Nervous in my sleep
Passed the year with boiling heart
Pushed down the anger

Hide in detention
Feel moody in the morning
I know you are mad

Feel sorry to hear
The things you try not to say
But slipped already

We drown on emo
But hurry stood on our sane
Forgave each other

I'm glad it was you
Person who chased on my days
The love of my life

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Sara Kendrick January 7, 2013 at 5:30 AM Enjoyed reading this morn..I am glad that I chose this one..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Yanny Widjanarko January 7, 2013 at 6:33 PM Thank you Sara, glad to have you here :D

John Posey January 7, 2013 at 5:01 AM Mighty fine Haiku here... You have penned it very well. This one is near textbook Haiku..... Jake Yanny Widjanarko January 7, 2013 at 6:33 PM Hehe, thanks Jake, cute comment :D

Andrea Dietrich January 3, 2013 at 11:44 AM well, it sounds like you MADE UP and that is marvelous. I too enjoyed that last haiku the most! Yanny Widjanarko January 3, 2013 at 5:26 PM Thank hou Andrea, the last line is also my favourite too :D

Vicky Tsiluma January 2, 2013 at 9:35 AM Well penned Yanny! It's always wise to resolve issues quickly so that peace and harmony can be maintained. Nicely done! Yanny Widjanarko January 3, 2013 at 5:21 PM Thank you Viky, i have the same thoughts as you :D -hug, yanny

Lucilla Carrillo January 2, 2013 at 8:23 AM Very nice haiku; Thanks for sharing with us. happy new Year. Lucilla Yanny Widjanarko January 2, 2013 at 8:53 AM Thanks Luci :D happy new year too :D

Jon A Cavanaugh January 1, 2013 at 8:38 PM I love your 3rd Haiku. The way you have expressed this common faux pas is priceless. Bravo! Yanny Widjanarko January 1, 2013 at 8:42 PM Thanks Jon, it's a pleasure to have a visit by you :) happy new year :D

Say Yesmaam January 1, 2013 at 8:08 PM Did not know a Haiku could be that long. Yanny Widjanarko January 1, 2013 at 8:11 PM No, actually haiku is only 3 lines, this just like the chains of haiku, a little modification of it :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 1, 2013 at 12:26 PM Glad you said sorry so quick, pity about the fight though xx Yanny Widjanarko January 1, 2013 at 4:40 PM Glad that we never took the fight so long, and regrets why happened in the night of new year eve :p