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Sorry For the First Fight 2013

Nervous in my sleep
Passed the year with boiling heart
Pushed down the anger

Hide in detention
Feel moody in the morning
I know you are mad

Feel sorry to hear
The things you try not to say
But slipped already

We drown on emo
But hurry stood on our sane
Forgave each other

I'm glad it was you
Person who chased on my days
The love of my life

Copyright © Yanny Widjanarko | Year Posted 2013

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Sara Kendrick Date: 1/7/2013 5:30:00 AM Enjoyed reading this morn..I am glad that I chose this one..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Login to Reply Yanny Widjanarko Date: 1/7/2013 6:33:00 PM Thank you Sara, glad to have you here :D

John Posey Date: 1/7/2013 5:01:00 AM Mighty fine Haiku here... You have penned it very well. This one is near textbook Haiku..... Jake Login to Reply Yanny Widjanarko Date: 1/7/2013 6:33:00 PM Hehe, thanks Jake, cute comment :D

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/3/2013 11:44:00 AM well, it sounds like you MADE UP and that is marvelous. I too enjoyed that last haiku the most! Login to Reply Yanny Widjanarko Date: 1/3/2013 5:26:00 PM Thank hou Andrea, the last line is also my favourite too :D

Vicky Tsiluma Date: 1/2/2013 9:35:00 AM Well penned Yanny! It's always wise to resolve issues quickly so that peace and harmony can be maintained. Nicely done! Login to Reply Yanny Widjanarko Date: 1/3/2013 5:21:00 PM Thank you Viky, i have the same thoughts as you :D -hug, yanny

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 1/2/2013 8:23:00 AM Very nice haiku; Thanks for sharing with us. happy new Year. Lucilla Login to Reply Yanny Widjanarko Date: 1/2/2013 8:53:00 AM Thanks Luci :D happy new year too :D

Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 1/1/2013 8:38:00 PM I love your 3rd Haiku. The way you have expressed this common faux pas is priceless. Bravo! Login to Reply Yanny Widjanarko Date: 1/1/2013 8:42:00 PM Thanks Jon, it's a pleasure to have a visit by you :) happy new year :D

Say Yesmaam Date: 1/1/2013 8:08:00 PM Did not know a Haiku could be that long. Login to Reply Yanny Widjanarko Date: 1/1/2013 8:11:00 PM No, actually haiku is only 3 lines, this just like the chains of haiku, a little modification of it :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 1/1/2013 12:26:00 PM Glad you said sorry so quick, pity about the fight though xx Login to Reply Yanny Widjanarko Date: 1/1/2013 4:40:00 PM Glad that we never took the fight so long, and regrets why happened in the night of new year eve :p