Sorry

Ouch the light it burns
But wait is that the gates
Am I really here or is this a dream 
I am standing in line for judgment
Now its my turn 
I smile and think 
Well I know I will make it 
God turns to me and says
Sorry you can not come in 
You dont believe so I cant let you in 
Goodbye my child 
I tried but it is just to late
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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July 3, 2013 at 11:06 PM
deep & cool.........SKAT
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May 8, 2013 at 4:21 PM
Cara, you will not be turned away...I don't believe in hell... However I believe we all go to heaven, unless we break the 10 commandments... you seem to be sweet... and if you ever need a poet friend here I am... glad it was only a nightmare... always~ LINDA
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