Sorry

Should have said something different Acted differntly But I erred Too late to take it back Tooo late to change my tone of voice But really - I did feel unease about what I said Sorry that I said that to you You didn't deserve it Yet in time The wounds shall heal Life will return to our friendship If you didn't know that Well, now you do A sweet harmony is about to wrap itself around us Giving hope tying the bonds to ether

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2012 8:13:00 PM

Matt, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 9/28/2012 1:29:00 PM

An apology that is genuine and sincere, Matthew! Sometimes people feel apologetic, but it always helps when it's said. Best wishes, Mikki

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/21/2012 9:26:00 PM

this is indeed a very sweet apology, Matt. More people should be doing this to each other. AS for my etheree, it may resemble a shape poem but it was just a "centered" etheree.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/21/2012 9:26:00 PM

by the way, what shape did you think it resembled?

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2012 3:23:00 AM

Thank you for sharing you writing with us Matthew. I enjoyed reading it this morning. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/20/2012 2:09:00 PM

Hello, Matt~ how are you? Sorry, sometimes does not work. but you are right,, in time everything bad goes away or heals. Hope your friendship was not destroyed.. I see this friend meant a lot to you. These are true expressions, a mans loud voice hurts more than they think at times.. always~ your friend...pd

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 9/20/2012 8:17:00 AM

is the spacing in this significant? because I think you could make it into a profile of a face if you wanted. also, is your last line supposed to be together? anyway, it is hard to know the right things to say at the time. like that old cliche, hindsight is 20/20. but if it's a good friendship, it will survive it :)