Sorrows Wake
Parts in me lack comforting
it...
gets tougher every day
To rewrite all of our fumbling
in...
each and every way
Suspended in suffering
while...
drowning in sorrows wake
Shattered pieces float atop the pain
on...
this pathetic lake
bmdavey@11/6/17
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