Anisha Dutta Poet Rhyme

Sorrowful Song

SORROWFUL  SONG 

          Pain of separation 
                          penned a lyric
                          mesmeric
                          melody of music.
        oozing lamentation.

      
           Tune resonating in purity
                           on sullen sadness
                           in morose madness
                           and crooning cadence
     touching grief-stricken beauty.


          Sorrowful song! Fantastic fantasy 
          on charm of ethereal ecstasy.

08/04/22

                               Sixth place
A Brian Strand Premier Choice 

Contest by Brian Strand

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Sam Kauffman August 18, 2022 at 9:48 AM This is so musical in its poignant alliteration and cadence Anisha. Beautifully and creatively composed! Congratulations on your win! Blessings!

JC Brul August 17, 2022 at 11:45 PM What a beauty! I love the use of light alliteration that makes this poem a winner. Congratulations.

Sara Kendrick August 7, 2022 at 1:29 PM Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. It must have been a very sad lyrical work. Sara Anisha Dutta August 8, 2022 at 10:43 AM Thanks Sara Blessings

Janice Canerdy August 7, 2022 at 10:43 AM Lovely, expressive piece, Anisha. CONGRATS on your win! Janice Anisha Dutta August 8, 2022 at 10:45 AM Thanks Janice Blessings Anisha Dutta August 8, 2022 at 10:43 AM Thanks Janice Blessings

Jennifer Proxenos August 7, 2022 at 6:30 AM This poem is so descriptive and so creative I wish you the all best in the contest you entered Anisha you write beautifully hugs an blessings Jennifer.

Sam Kauffman August 4, 2022 at 10:49 AM Anisha, this is so very interesting - filled with powerful alliteration flowing like lyrics. Thank you for sharing!