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Sorrowful Liars

It was a fairy tale went wrong. Memories sweep past. Not touching just to see us off. Legends born, shadows lurking. It existence, no secrets to the modern world. Say, human are fleeting living creatures. Addicted mind to the old good times. Passing through life from generation to death. Rumors grew, souls that breath, Living things resigned to hear never Curtains fall, darkness crept Hell, cold wind whips, Fleeting, cunning without a shape Baneful thirst, perfumes in the air fumes. Aye! Madness has come. Excruciating pain died out. Unforgivable sin happens once more. Sorrowful liars.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/23/2016 10:20:00 PM

Luchi, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 6/20/2016 6:26:00 PM

Luchi, good going on your first post. ;) welcome to poetry soup. Skat

Luchi Enojo
Date: 6/21/2016 2:02:00 AM

Hi Skat, Thank you it was indeed my first try and still not good...